The road commissioner drove the spade into the crown of the raised earth once, twice, throwing sod, a big man making a point for the frightened locals who would not set foot on the hill. On the third stroke, the spade rang. Not the dull thud of a rock, but a high, wrong note that hung in the air a half second too long. Roswell Teague stopped.

Ambrose Vain came over. The crew at the edge of the field went dead quiet and set down their tools. The two men knelt together and cleared the loose dirt with their hands, and there, in the side of the cut, gray against the black soil, was a length of something that was not stone and was not root. Vain was forty-six years old that autumn, a land surveyor by trade, built for the work: tall and lean, a little stooped from a life bent over a transit.
His hands were the thing people remembered, long fingers with swollen knuckles from cold mornings, skin stained with ink that never quite washed out, and one pale scar running the length of his right thumb where a chain tape had once snapped and opened him to the bone. He kept his ledgers in a hand so small and even it looked printed. He did not drink. He did not talk more than he had to.
In thirty-one years of running lines across half of Ohio, he had never, by his own account, seen a thing he could not measure. Vain believed in the chain and the transit the way other men believe in prayer. Give him a corner post and a clear morning, and he could tell you where the world was to the inch. He had buried a wife young and never taken another.
He had no children and wanted none. He had the road and the county work and the long clean satisfaction of a line closing true at the end of a day. He was not a man who went looking for the strange, which is exactly the kind of man the strange seems to prefer. He came to the town of Dunore Crossing in the second week of October.
It was a small place then, a scatter of houses along the creek that gave it its name, a feed store, a chapel with a leaning steeple, a livery. The train let him off at a depot that was really just a platform and a shed. Stepping down with his instrument case in his hand, he noticed how the birds carried on everywhere along the tracks and then simply stopped all at once a quarter mile out toward the creek bottoms, as if there were a line drawn in the air that they knew and he did not. He noted it the way he noted everything, without alarm, and forgot it, and remembered it much later.
Roswell Teague met him at the depot himself, which a commissioner does not usually do for a hired surveyor. Teague was a heavy man near sixty with a politician’s handshake and a farmer’s caution. He had a proposition and a worry he was working to keep off his face, and he was not very good at it. On the drive out he talked too much and about nothing: the weather, the price of feed corn, the doings of the county board.
Only when the wagon came down into the low ground did he go quiet and slow the horse, as though the ground itself had told him to lower his voice. The county wanted a new road cut through the Dunore bottom, a straight run to link the crossing with the Mill Road to the north. The cheapest line, the line that would save the county a full season of grading, ran directly across a low rise of earth that the old maps did not name and the local people would not walk on. Vain had seen mounds before.
Ohio is full of them, long ridges of earth raised by hands nobody living remembers. Antiquarians came from the eastern colleges to poke at them and argue about them in journals. Now and then a farmer plowed one flat for the extra acre. To Vain a mound was a shape on the ground, a volume of earth he could calculate, an obstacle or not depending on the grade.
Teague drove him out to the bottom that first afternoon and stopped the wagon well short of the rise and would come no closer. Vain climbed down alone and did what he always did. He walked it. He paced it.
He set his first stakes. It was long, the better part of two hundred feet, and it did not run straight. From the far slope in the flat gray light before rain, he could see what the shape was meant to be. It coiled.
It started thick at one end, a broad, blunt head of raised earth, and narrowed as it wound, three great loops lying in the grass, tapering to a fine tail that pointed down at the creek. The grass grew wrong on it. All around, the bottom was gone to autumn, brown and flattened by the rains. But the grass on the mound stood green, and stood still, even when the wind came through and moved everything else.
The people around the crossing did not call it the serpent mound, though that is what a stranger might have said. They called it the long coil, and they said it the way you say the name of a person you do not want to summon. That first evening Vain took a room at the boarding house kept by a widow named Otalia Marsh, a spare, upright woman of about fifty-eight with gray hair pinned so tight it pulled at her temples. She fed him a good plain supper and asked him nothing, which suited him.
It was only on the second night, when he mentioned that he would be running his lines across the long coil in the morning, that something changed in her face. She set down the coffee pot. She asked him plainly whether Roswell Teague had told him what the ground was. Vain said it was a mound, an old Indian mound, and there were hundreds like it in the state.
“There are hundreds like it,” Otalia Marsh said. “That is true, and men have dug into a great many of them, and carried off what they found, and gone on to live long lives and die in their beds. But this one they did not dig. This is the one they covered.
Ask yourself why a people would raise a thing this size only to leave it be when the ground was good bottom land they could have farmed. Ask yourself what is worth that much dirt to keep down. ”
Then, because he pressed her for the reasonable version, the story behind the superstition, she told him about the other surveyors, the ones before. In the 1870s a road had been proposed across the same bottom, the very same line.
A party had come out from the county with chains and transits, four men and a foreman, and worked the low ground for the better part of a month. She said the men had begun to change one at a time, the way milk changes. Nothing you could point to on a given day, and yet unmistakable by the end. One stopped sleeping.
One stopped speaking except to answer a question, and then stopped answering. The foreman, a big, confident man who had laughed at the whole idea, was the last to go strange and the worst. One morning he simply was not at his boarding house, and his instrument was found out on the mound, set up and leveled and sighted, pointing at nothing, at the empty air over the creek. The man himself was three counties gone by nightfall and never came back to collect his pay.
The road was abandoned, and the county did what counties do with a thing they cannot explain. They wrote it up as a survey discontinued for cause, filed the papers, let the grass grow back green and still, and told their children to keep off the hill without ever telling them why, until the why wore away and only the keeping off was left. In the morning Vain went out to run his lines. The trouble started with the transit.
A transit is a fine thing, a telescope on a swiveling base with a compass and levels built in, and a good one is truer than the man using it. Vain’s was a good one, English glass, thirty years in his hands, and it had never given him a false reading. But on the long coil it would not settle. He would sight a stake, lock the plates, and the needle would drift, a slow, patient creep, a degree, then two, as if something under the mound were turning very slowly beneath his feet and dragging the north with it.
He blamed iron in the soil, made a note to correct for it, and moved his instrument to the far side. On the far side the needle drifted the other way, toward the mound. Whichever side he stood on, the needle wanted to point at the long coil the way a plumb line wants the ground. The level was another matter.
The level is the surveyor’s bedrock, a bubble of spirit in a glass tube that tells you simply where flat is. On the second day, standing on the crown of the mound with the tripod planted firm, Vain watched the bubble slide slowly to one end of the tube and sit there, telling him the world was tilted, though the tripod had not moved and the ground was as level as any he had ever set an instrument on. He tapped the glass. He reset the feet.
The bubble slid back, held a moment, and slid away again. It came to him, standing there in the wrong green grass with the gray sky pressing down, that the bubble was not wrong, that the instrument was doing its one honest job, that there was something out of true about that ground that had nothing to do with slope. He wired the county seat and had a second transit sent out on the next train, a different make, a different maker. He set it up beside his own on the crown of the coil, expecting the two to disagree and prove one of them broken.
They did not disagree. They agreed with each other exactly, and both were wrong in the same direction: both needles leaning toward the mound, both bubbles crawling to the same end of the glass. Two honest instruments made by two different hands in two different years, telling the same lie in the same voice, which is the one thing that should not be able to happen. Vain packed the borrowed transit back in its case that evening and did not use it again.
He wrote in his ledger that two instruments cannot share a flaw, and that if they read the same wrong thing, then the wrong thing is the ground, and that a man who has built his life on the ground being trustworthy does not know how to stand up in the morning once he has written that sentence down. But he stood up. He always stood up. By the end of that second day he had his rough lines laid and his stakes driven, a neat row marching over the head of the coil where the road would cut.
Teague had hired a small crew of local men to clear brush ahead of the grading, four grown men who needed the wage. They worked the low ground willingly enough, but not one of them would set foot on the mound itself. They cleared right up to the edge of it and no further. When Vain asked the oldest of them, a lean, quiet fellow named Purse Aldis, why they stopped, Aldis did not look up from his bill hook.
He said only that his grandfather had cleared this bottom once, forty years back, for the same reason, and had come home from it changed, and would not say how, and had made everyone in the house swear never to break the skin of that hill. Aldis said the word skin as if the mound had one. There was a thing about the brush that Vain did not want to think about. They cleared a clean margin back from the base of the mound, a good day’s work, and in the morning it had come back.
Not grown. Brush does not grow a foot in a night. But it had crept. The cut edge was not where they had left it.
The green had come down off the mound a handsbreadth in the dark, the way a tide comes up a beach. The men saw it, looked at it, picked up their bill hooks, and cut it back again without a word. The next morning the stakes had moved. Not all of them.
Six of the twelve he had driven across the head of the coil. He found them lying in the grass, pulled clean out of the ground and set down again in a row, but a wrong row, a row that curved. Someone or something had taken his straight line of survey stakes and rearranged them into a gentle arc that followed the curve of the mound itself. He thought of the crew, but the crew would not touch the mound, and the boarding house was a mile off.
When Vain accused Purse Aldis flat out, the man went so pale and so still that Vain knew he was more frightened than he was. Aldis said in a voice gone quiet that nobody moved them. “They move because you drove them in. You woke it up, mister, you and your little brass eye.
And now it is counting. ”
That night Ambrose Vain, the man who had never seen a thing he could not measure, wrote in his ledger a single line: “The stakes have moved and I cannot say how. And for the first time in my working life, I am afraid of open ground. ”
He did the thing a reasonable man does.
He went to the courthouse, a half day off by wagon, looking for the 1870s survey, the discontinued one, because he wanted the field notes of the party that had failed before him. A surveyor trusts another surveyor’s numbers the way a doctor trusts another doctor’s chart. The clerk, a dry, tidy man named Lucian Merurl, went still in a way Vain was beginning to recognize and said the file was restricted. On what grounds, Vain asked, for a discontinued road survey forty years cold.
Merurl said he did not know the file had been marked so before his time, and that the only note on the docket was that the field books had been sealed at the request of the surveyor general and were not to be reissued. Then, because Vain kept at him, Merurl leaned in and dropped his voice. The foreman of that old party had written the surveyor general a letter before he left the county for good, he said, and the letter was in the file too, and a clerk before Merurl had read it once and told him only one line of it. The foreman had written that the ground on the Dunore Bottom was not empty, that it was occupied, and that no road should ever be run across an occupied place.
Vain rode back to Dunore Crossing in the dark with that word turning in his head. Occupied. It is a surveyor’s word in its way, written on a plat to mean a parcel has a tenant. He could not stop his tired mind from finishing the thought: a tenant, however quiet, however long asleep, is still a thing with a claim and does not care to be built over.
There was one more thing Merurl told him. The surveyor general back in the seventies had written a reply to that foreman’s letter, and the reply was in the file too, a single line in an official hand. It did not argue with the foreman and did not call him mad, which is what you would expect an official to do with a letter like that. It agreed with him.
It said only that the survey was discontinued, that the field books were sealed, and that no petition to reopen the Dunore Bottom was to be entertained by the office in perpetuity. It was signed and dated and never explained. Merurl said, “A man does not seal a thing in perpetuity because he thinks it is nonsense. He seals it in perpetuity because he is afraid of it, and because he is more afraid of the next man who will not be.
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It was the fourth day when they found the first of it, and they were not even meant to be digging. Teague had come out to see the progress, impatient, the way men who answer to a county board get impatient, and he had heard about the stakes and the brush and did not like the sound of a job going soft on account of ghost stories. He walked the head of the coil himself in his good boots, out onto the mound where the crew would not go, to make a point of it, and declared it all foolishness. No heap of dirt was going to stop a road the board had already promised.
He took up a spade to prove it. Now they knelt beside the cut, looking at the thing in the side of the dirt. It was a bone, as much as they could agree on later when they could talk about it at all. A long bone, longer than it had any business being, and jointed in a way a bone should not be jointed, with more turns in it than a limb has, so that it seemed to have been made to curl the way the mound curled.
It was the wrong color for old bone, not the brown of a thing that has lain in the ground a thousand years, but a pale, living gray. And it was cold, colder than the soil around it, cold the way a stone is cold when it has been in the shade of a spring since winter. Teague, who was not a fanciful man, went the color of ash and sat back on his heels in the dirt and said nothing for a long while. Vain took out the folding rule he carried, and because measuring was the one prayer he had, he measured it.
He wrote the figure down in his ledger. Against every quiet instinct in his body, because he was being paid to clear the ground, and because Roswell Teague told him to, and because a part of him still needed to prove it was only a bone, he helped work the thing loose from the soil. They lifted it out, laid it in a wooden crate packed with straw, and carried it off the mound. Every one of the four crewmen turned their backs while it passed, all of them at the same moment, without a signal, the way a field of cattle will all turn from a coming storm.
The town knew by supper. By the time Vain came in off the bottom, men stood outside the feed store who would not go in, and the chapel with the leaning steeple had its lamp lit, though it was not a Sunday. The pastor, a soft-spoken man named Cyrus Fenwick, not old, sober, educated, the sort who preaches against superstition as a matter of course, had already been out to look at the crate. He told Vain that he had opened his Bible that night out of habit for comfort and had not been able to read a word of it, that the letters would not hold still on the page.
He had knelt to pray and felt, for the first time in his life of faith, that he was praying up against a wall, that something was standing between the little chapel and the sky it usually spoke to, and it was standing over the bottom. He asked Vain whether it was true the thing had been dug from the crown of the long coil. When Vain said it was, the pastor closed his eyes and said his own grandmother, who had come to the county before there was a county, had told him, as a warning, that the low ground was a lid. The Shaunie came the next day.
There was still in that part of the county in 1911 a small community of Shaunie families who had never left the creek bottoms, who farmed and kept to themselves and were left mostly alone. Among them was an old man the town knew as Nathaniel Crane, past seventy, straight-backed, with a face like weathered oak and eyes that had gone pale at the rim the way old eyes do. He walked up to the boarding house the morning after they lifted the bone, a long walk for a man his age, and he did not knock. He waited on the porch until Vain came out.
He told him, in plain and careful English, that he already knew what was in the crate, because his people had felt it the moment it came out of the ground, the way you feel a door open somewhere in a house at night, a change in the air of the rooms you are not standing in. He said the mound was not a grave. Graves hold the dead, and the dead are ours, and we tend them and grieve them, and there is nothing in a grave to fear but sorrow. This was not that.
He said his grandfather’s grandfathers had raised the long coil, and it had cost them more than anyone now could imagine. Whole seasons of labor when labor was survival. Whole harvests. They went without, to move that much earth by hand, and they had not done it to honor anything.
They had done it to hold something down. Vain asked the obvious thing. He asked what it was. Nathaniel Crane looked at him with those pale-rimmed eyes and said the sentence that the whole county would come to repeat in low voices for a generation.
“It is not human. The rest of it — it is not human, and it is not an animal, and it is not one of ours, and it is not one of yours. It is older than both. It was here when the water was higher and the hills were younger, and it does not belong on top of the ground.
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He said, “Put it back. Cover it. Raise the earth over it again and walk away and let this road go around. I will help you do it, and no one need ever know.
” And then he said the part that Vain could not stop hearing afterward in the dark when the house was quiet. “But you have already let the air at it, and I do not know if putting it back will be enough, because the ground has been counting the days it was open, and so has the thing under it. ”
Vain thanked the old man the way you thank a man for a warning you have decided not to take. He said he would speak to the commissioner.
He did not put it back. He told himself the bone was a bone, and the letter in the courthouse was the ravings of a foreman who had cracked under the pressure of a hard job, and every one of those sentences was a small door he was closing on himself one after another until he was alone in the dark with the thing he would not name. The nights got worse after that. Otalia Marsh’s house sat a mile from the bottom, but Vain began to lose his sleep to a sound he could not place: a slow, heavy turning sound, far off, like something very large shifting its weight in a bed of earth.
Each night it seemed a little nearer, or a little louder, which he told himself were the same thing, and which he came to understand were not. Nearer is not louder. Nearer is worse. The crate with the bone sat in the feed store because no one would keep it in a home.
The owner, a level fellow named Amos Orr, told Vain that his dogs, which had slept in that store their whole lives, would no longer go inside. They stood at the door in the evenings with their hackles up, facing the crate in the back, and they would not bark, which was the part that bothered him. They only stared and trembled and would not make a sound, as if barking might be answered. Orr said the milk went in his cooler overnight, which had never happened in October in his life, and that a smell had come into the store that he could not scrub out.
Not rot. He knew rot. Something older and colder than rot. The smell of the bottom of a well, the smell of a place the sun has never once touched.
A traveling man passed through, a threshing machine salesman working the county, and took the last room at the boarding house for a night. He slept poorly, he said in the morning, on account of a dream, and told it at the table half laughing, the way people tell dreams. He had dreamed that the floor of his room was not a floor but a thin skin over deep water, and that something enormous was circling below it, patient, unhurried, taking its time, and that it knew his name, and was in no rush, because it had all the time there was, and he had only the one night. He left before the others were up, and paid double not to have to stay the second night.
The house itself had begun to change in small ways. Otalia Marsh kept a tall case clock in the hall, her husband’s, that had kept true time for forty years. Now, in the small hours, it ran slow, then stopped, then started again on its own, without anyone touching the weights, and it always stopped at the same place on the dial, the hour Vain had knelt at the mound with his lantern. The water in the wash basin skinned over with a thin ice some mornings and not others, in a month too warm for it.
And the old, deaf, good-natured dog Otalia kept took to sitting at the top of the stairs at night, facing the front door, facing the direction of the bottom, and would sit there until dawn, not whining, not sleeping, just watching the door as if it expected the door to be knocked on by something it already knew the shape of. Vain went back out to the mound alone on the fifth night, because a measuring man needs to prove to himself that a thing has a cause. He found the cut where they had taken the bone, knelt beside it, and held the lantern down into it. The soil at the bottom of the cut had moved.
Not fallen in. Moved. Disturbed from below, humped up and cracked the way ground looks over the back of a mole, except that whatever had done this was not the size of a mole. The cracks in the earth ran in a curve, a long, slow curve, the same curve as the mound, the same curve as his stakes had been bent into.
While he knelt there with the cold coming up out of the earth into his knees, the lantern flame stood straight up and stopped moving, though there was a wind, and in the sudden stillness he heard, very close now, just under the skin of the hill, the turning sound. He understood, in the way the body understands before the mind will allow it, that the thing was not trying to get out. It was turning to face him. He could not run at first.
He knelt there and watched a single stone at the lip of the cut rock slowly back and forth, back and forth, though nothing touched it, in time with the turning below, the way a cup will tremble on a shelf when a heavy wagon passes in the road. Except there was no wagon and no road. Only when the stone went still, only when the turning stopped, in that worst of all moments, when the great slow thing had come around to where it wanted to be and lay quiet and attentive under six feet of dirt, only then did the feeling break and let him go. He took up the lantern and ran, and did not stop running until he saw the light of the boarding house.
Otalia Marsh was awake. She was always awake now. She met him at the door and did not ask him anything because she had heard it too, from a mile off, every night. She knew the look of a man who has finally heard it up close, the look her own young husband had worn forty years before when the first party failed.
She told Vain quietly that this was how it had gone the last time, right up to the end, and that the end had come fast after a man went out to the mound alone at night. She did not say what the end was. In the morning he went to Nathaniel Crane, past pride, past argument. He asked the old man to help.
Crane looked at him for a long time and said, “It may be too late, but we will try, because the alternative is worse for all of us, yours and mine, and everyone who drinks from this creek. ” He gathered a few of the men from the creek community. They would take no wage, and they would let no white man help with the doing of it, only the covering. They went out to the long coil in the last gray of a wet dawn, when the light is neither night nor day, and the birds have not started.
Vain was not permitted to watch what they did, and he did not write it down. He was allowed only to help move the earth after, once the old men had done whatever the old men did. He heard them speaking low and steady for a long time, and once in the middle of it the turning under the hill answered with one great slow shift, and then went quiet, and the speaking did not stop and did not falter. After that the ground was only ground.
They raised the crown of the mound again over the cut, packed it, and turned the sod back. One of the younger men laid a flat creek stone over the place and pressed it down with his boot. Nathaniel Crane walked the whole length of the long coil, all three loops of it, from the blunt head to the fine tail at the creek, saying something under his breath the whole way. When he came to the tail he stopped and stood a long while looking at the water.
Then he came back and told Vain it was done, as done as it could be, and that the road must go around, well around, and that the bone must go back into the ground too, that same day before dark, without fail. But the bone was gone. When they went to the feed store, the crate was where it had been, and the straw was in it, packed just as it had been packed, holding the shape of the thing like a mold holds the shape of what has left it: a long, curled hollow pressed into the straw where the cold gray length had lain. Amos Orr swore no man had come in or out, that he had slept across the door with a shotgun he never loaded, because there was nothing of shotgun answers in this.
The dogs were gone too, all three, and they never came back. Nathaniel Crane, when they told him, did not look surprised and did not look relieved. The old man only looked at the empty crate for a while and then said that a thing that has been let out into the air will sometimes find its own way back down before you can carry it, if it decides the going down is what it wants, and that this was better than the other possibility. He would not say what the other possibility was.
The bone was gone, and the mound was closed, and the great slow turning under the hill, which had grown louder every night for a week, was silent that night, and stayed silent. Otalia Marsh slept for the first time in nine nights. So did the whole of Dunore Crossing, and everyone told themselves it was over. Ambrose Vain finished his report.
He wrote that the terrain of the Dunore bottom was unsuitable for a direct road on account of unstable subsoil and a subsurface obstruction of undetermined origin, and he recommended the northern route around the low ground, which cost the county a whole extra season of grading. The board approved it without much argument because Roswell Teague, who had gone out to that mound a scoffer with a spade in his hand, went before the board and told them to approve it, and would not say why. No man who had been on the bottom that autumn ever pushed to send a road across the long coil again. Teague did not run for his seat the next year.
He sold his interests and moved to his daughter’s place in the next state, and by the account of the people who knew him never spoke of the Dunore Bottom once, not even at the end, though he was known to leave a room if the talk turned to old roads. The road went around. It is still there, taking its long, patient curve away from the low ground. There is a survey word for a bend put in a road to avoid an obstacle.
They call it a deflection. The story did not end in 1911, because the county has a long memory for money and a short one for fear. In the early 1950s, more than forty years on, the state was widening the roads for the automobiles, straightening the old wagon deflections nobody living remembered the reasons for. A new survey crew came out to the Dunore Bottom with better instruments than Ambrose Vain ever dreamed of, motor levels and steel tapes, and a young engineer in charge who had a college degree and a schedule and no patience for a green hill.
But there was still one old voice to send out ahead of them. Otalia Marsh was long gone by then, but she had told the story to enough people that it had a life of its own, and there was a retired roadman named Warren Holloway, past seventy himself, who had heard it from her as a boy. Holloway drove out to that bottom on his own gas and stood in front of the young engineer’s transit and told him the whole of it: the stakes and the level and the bone and the word the Shaunie gave it, and told him that the road bent for a reason, and that the reason was still down there. The young engineer was polite about it, by every account.
Then he went to set up his instrument on the crown of the mound anyway, because that is what young men with degrees and schedules do. He got the tripod planted and bent to the eyepiece, and whatever he saw through it, or whatever the level did in the glass, or whatever moved once, slow and enormous, under his good new boots, he came up off that mound white and shaking, and would not go back. The crew went around, and the road out there still bends today. Wider now, paved now, but bending, always bending, away from the low green ground that does not brown.
Nathaniel Crane died two winters later in his own bed, an old man, and the small community by the creek tended his grave the way he had said the dead should be tended, with sorrow and nothing worse. Otalia Marsh kept her boarding house until she was too old to keep it, and she told the story to any surveyor or roadman who ever came asking about the bottom, plainly, as a warning, and not as a tale. More than one road went around that low ground over the years, on the strength of a widow’s word and a green hill that would not brown. Ambrose Vain never ran another line.
He was forty-six that autumn, and he lived to be an old man himself. But he sold his transit, that fine English instrument that had served him thirty years, sold it to a younger man in the county seat for far less than it was worth. When the younger man asked him why, Vain said only that it had started pointing at things, and left it at that. He kept his ledgers to the end of his life, and in the very back of the last of them, after he was gone, his family found the note that tells how it stayed with him all those quiet years.
He had written: “The road bends around the coil, and I am grateful for that. But I have never been able to walk on level ground since without testing it first with my foot. Because I learned in the Dunore Bottom that flat is not the same as still, that a thing can lie so quiet for so long that men forget it was ever put down on purpose, and that some of the quietest ground in the world is only quiet because of the great weight of what it is holding down. ”
Whether the thing is still down there, turning slowly in the dark under a curve of raised earth, while a country road bends politely around it, nobody can say.
Nobody has dug to find out. Otalia Marsh left the question on the second night, before any of it began, and it remains the only question that ever mattered: ask yourself what is worth that much dirt to keep down.